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Kelvin Chung in
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Oct 8th, 2008 |
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Well, i decided to edit my crappy poem from before, not much though. changed some wording problems, and made it flow a bit better… Any suggestions would still be nice… XD
THE RAIN: BY KELVIN CHUNG
The rain,
Spheres of light, droplets of crystal
Brilliant life, ever falling.
Beautiful water,...